Your helmet was snug on tight/And yout held on to your gun with all your tight/ There were some gun shots in the distance/ And shout of enemies being captured from resistence/you felt a wave of sweat and damp/Bloody bodies scattered around the battlefield/ You know the war would soon end/But now, the country's mistake you must amend/ Dreaming of returning to your wife and kids, back at home/ All the people there wish you a happy Chrismas Eve.
12/12/2010
Lily! This is very creative and very thoughtful. It is crazy what the soldiers out their are sacraficing. I thought you did a really good job of sending them such a strong, powerful message. Everything you stated was very powerful and realistic. I love the writing style and the way you put everything here! Great Job! :)
Posted by: Erin Sullivan | 12/12/2010 at 05:44 PM